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학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there Chelsea,
I agree on your opinion, Time really flies so fast...
Weekend also gone fast more than weekday... so you and I must have to enjoy everything in weekend. kk
Anyway come back to today's topic.
"What are the qualities or characteristics that every leader should have?"
leader should have a many ability such as leadership, vision of future, and fame ETC...
I think of them most important is calm. every leaders must be determined every business work to have pice of mind.
It can reach their goals will help. I am thinking it is true.
Do you think you are a good leader?
See you on Thursday... :( I'm going to my military service on Monday. kkk
강사 첨삭
Hi there Luke!
Yeah, it does flies so fast^^
I also agree wit you! We have to enjoy everything! We have to grap every opportunity that comes to us.
You\'re very lucky, you know that?
I\'ll see you on Thursday^^
You can do it^^
Take care always!
~T.Chelsea
Hi there Chelsea,>> CORRECT^^I agree on your opinion, Time really flies so fast...
>> CORRECT^^Weekend also gone fast more than weekday... so you and I must have to enjoy everything in weekend. kk>> Weekend flies faster than weekdays, so you and I must have to enjoy everything on weekend. Kkkk.Anyway come back to today\'s topic. \"What are the qualities or characteristics that every leader should have?\">> CORRECT^^leader should have a many ability such as leadership, vision of future, and fame ETC...
>> Leaders should have many ability such as leadership, vision of the future, fame and etc.I think of them most important is calm. every leaders must be determined every business work to have pice of mind.>> I think the most important thing it for them to be calm. Every leader must be determined for every business to have a piece of mind.It can reach their goals will help. I am thinking it is true.>> It can help them reach their goals. I think, my opinion is true.Do you think you are a good leader?>> CORRECT^^See you on Thursday... :( I\'m going to my military service on Monday. kkk
>> CORRECT^^
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