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2014-04-04 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Hi, Jane :) Thanks for your helpness. Have a good weekend. Usually, It's difficult for reading. I don't know how I practice to speak in English. And, Jane. I'm going to trip on Jeju-ilsland for 5days. From monday to friday. Maybe I couldn't to receive your call. Anyway I trying to talk with you. This is today's homework! I'm not confidence. ------------------------------------------------------------------------ If I could spend 1days locked in a rooom without phone, I really scared and cried. I thought a lot of thinking my history of life. I missed family, friends and lovely boyfriend. I love them. and I go out after next day, I would change my mimd. I'll say hello to there, visit to there, and love more than now.

강사 첨삭

Hi there! Wow! I heard that Jeju Island is a very beautiful place. Sad part is, I won\'t be having my class with you for a week. :( Well, anyway, enjoy your trip to one of the amazing islands in Korea! I can\'t wait to hear your stories about your trip! Always take an extra care!   For the mean time, please take note of the following grammar suggestions below.   Have a happy and a fruitful weekend! Teacher Jane :)   Hi, Jane :) >> Hi Jane,Thanks for your helpness. Have a good weekend. >> Thanks for your help. Have a good weekend. >> OR: Thank you for your help. Have a good weekend.Usually, It\'s difficult for reading. >> Usually, it\'s difficult to read.I don\'t know how I practice to speak in English. >> I don\'t know how to practice speak in English. And, Jane. I\'m going to trip on Jeju-ilsland for 5days. From monday to friday. >> By the way Jane, I have a trip to Jeju Island for 5 days. It would be from Monday to Friday.Maybe I couldn\'t to receive your call. >> I think I won\'t be able to answer your call.Anyway I trying to talk with you. >> Anyway, I\'ll try to talk to you. >>OR: Anyway, I\'ll try to attend my class with you.This is today\'s homework! >> Correct :) >> OR: It\'s time to do my homework.I\'m not confidence. >> I\'m not confident.------------------------------------------------------------------------If I could spend 1days locked in a rooom without phone, I really scared and cried. >> If I could spend 1 day locked in a room without a phone, I will be too scared and definitely cry. >> OR: I will be scared and I will cry if I will spend 1 day locked in a room without a phone.I thought a lot of thinking my history of life. I missed family, friends and lovely boyfriend. >> I think a lot about my life. I miss my family, friends and my lovely boyfriend.I love them. and I go out after next day, I would change my mimd. >> I love them. If I will be out of the room the next day, I\'ll change my mind.I\'ll say hello to there, visit to there, and love more than now. >> I\'ll say hello to them, visit them and love them even more.

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