Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, Jane :)
Thanks for your helpness. Have a good weekend.
Usually, It's difficult for reading.
I don't know how I practice to speak in English.
And, Jane.
I'm going to trip on Jeju-ilsland for 5days. From monday to friday.
Maybe I couldn't to receive your call.
Anyway I trying to talk with you.
This is today's homework!
I'm not confidence.
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If I could spend 1days locked in a rooom without phone, I really scared and cried.
I thought a lot of thinking my history of life. I missed family, friends and lovely boyfriend.
I love them. and I go out after next day, I would change my mimd.
I'll say hello to there, visit to there, and love more than now.
강사 첨삭
Hi there!
Wow! I heard that Jeju Island is a very beautiful place.
Sad part is, I won\'t be having my class with you for a week. :(
Well, anyway, enjoy your trip to one of the amazing islands in Korea!
I can\'t wait to hear your stories about your trip!
Always take an extra care!
For the mean time, please take note of the following grammar suggestions below.
Have a happy and a fruitful weekend!
Teacher Jane :)
Hi, Jane :)
>> Hi Jane,Thanks for your helpness. Have a good weekend.
>> Thanks for your help. Have a good weekend.
>> OR: Thank you for your help. Have a good weekend.Usually, It\'s difficult for reading.
>> Usually, it\'s difficult to read.I don\'t know how I practice to speak in English.
>> I don\'t know how to practice speak in English. And, Jane. I\'m going to trip on Jeju-ilsland for 5days. From monday to friday.
>> By the way Jane, I have a trip to Jeju Island for 5 days. It would be from Monday to Friday.Maybe I couldn\'t to receive your call.
>> I think I won\'t be able to answer your call.Anyway I trying to talk with you.
>> Anyway, I\'ll try to talk to you.
>>OR: Anyway, I\'ll try to attend my class with you.This is today\'s homework!
>> Correct :)
>> OR: It\'s time to do my homework.I\'m not confidence.
>> I\'m not confident.------------------------------------------------------------------------If I could spend 1days locked in a rooom without phone, I really scared and cried.
>> If I could spend 1 day locked in a room without a phone, I will be too scared and definitely cry.
>> OR: I will be scared and I will cry if I will spend 1 day locked in a room without a phone.I thought a lot of thinking my history of life. I missed family, friends and lovely boyfriend.
>> I think a lot about my life. I miss my family, friends and my lovely boyfriend.I love them. and I go out after next day, I would change my mimd.
>> I love them. If I will be out of the room the next day, I\'ll change my mind.I\'ll say hello to there, visit to there, and love more than now.
>> I\'ll say hello to them, visit them and love them even more.
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