homework!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
학생이 쓴 원문
How old were you when you went on your first flight? Where did you go?
My first flight is when i'm 11years old,
And i went to Jeju Island. It was very nice!
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday, [이름] Ho!!
Oh, thank you for doing your homework. Well done!
And yes, I forgot to tell you, thank you for today. You did well!
Keep up the good work, okay? Enjoy your weekend, sweetie!
I will see you again on Monday. Good night dear.
~T.May
How old were you when you went on your first flight? Where did you go?>> CORRECT!
My first flight is when i\'m 11years old,
>> I had my first flight when I was 11 years old.And i went to Jeju Island. It was very nice!
>> CORRECT!
>>OR: And I went to Jeju Island. It was very nice!
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