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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ms. [Name]!
Wow! Just reading at it makes me want to go to other places too.
I envy you. haha.
But anyway, I do hope that you would be able to do all the things that you wanted to do.
And I think that it is already near.
Isn\'t it?
Thanks for today\'s class and for re-enrolling!
See you again!
Take care!
Always
Kathrine ^^
Tell me about something you have never done but would like to do.
I\'d like to go to Europe but I have never done it.
>> correct!
If I didn\'t attend graduate school, I should go there.
>> if I didn\'t attend the graduate school, I should have gone there.
However, the tuition was high and the class was during vacation.
>> However, the tuition is so high/expensive and the class was during the vacation.
Finally, I couldn\'t secure some money and many times.
>> Finally, I was not able to secure some money for many times.
I will finish it after one year.
>> correct!
I\'d like to go to Eurpoe for three weeks with my husband.
>> correct!
Furthermore I hope to go other place such as Turkey, Holland, America and so on.
>> Furthermore, I hope to go to other places such as in Turkey, Holland, America and so on.
Therefore I have to save a lot of money.
>> correct!
I\'m very excited just thinking about it. Thank you.
>> correct!
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