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2014-04-07 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Tell me about something you have never done but would like to do. I'd like to go to Europe but I have never done it. If I didn't attend graduate school, I should go there. However, the tuition was high and the class was during vacation. Finally, I couldn't secure some money and many times. I will finish it after one year. I'd like to go to Eurpoe for three weeks with my husband. Furthermore I hope to go other place such as Turkey, Holland, America and so on. Therefore I have to save a lot of money. I'm very excited just thinking about it. Thank you.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Ms. [Name]!

Wow! Just reading at it makes me want to go to other places too.

I envy you. haha.

But anyway, I do hope that you would be able to do all the things that you wanted to do.

And I think that it is already near.
Isn\'t it?

Thanks for today\'s class and for re-enrolling!
See you again!

Take care!


Always

Kathrine ^^


Tell me about something you have never done but would like to do.

I\'d like to go to Europe but I have never done it.

>>  correct!

If I didn\'t attend graduate school, I should go there.

>>  if I didn\'t attend the graduate school, I should have gone there.

However, the tuition was high and the class was during vacation.

>>  However, the tuition is so high/expensive and the class was during the vacation.

Finally, I couldn\'t secure some money and many times.

>>  Finally, I was not able to secure some money for many times.

I will finish it after one year.

>>  correct!

 I\'d like to go to Eurpoe for three weeks with my husband.

>>  correct!

Furthermore I hope to go other place such as Turkey, Holland, America and so on.

>>  Furthermore, I hope to go to other places such as in  Turkey, Holland, America and so on.

Therefore I have to save a lot of money.

>>  correct!

I\'m very excited just thinking about it. Thank you.

>>  correct!

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