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2014-04-07 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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If you could listen to one song for the rest of your life, which song would you choose? I think my friend who likes listening music. She has great stereo that is very old and expensive. When she do yoga, she listen to music. She also has a lot of LPs(long-playing record). I listened to the music when I went to the house. I think that the feeling is different and sound is good. However I can't distinguish easily. I usually listen to music while taking a shower or washing the dish. I usually don't choose music just hear it through radio or internet. I like pop song, CCM(Contemporary Christian music) and classic but I don't like Rock music. Whenever I listen to it, I get a stress. However I know that rock'n roll singer is nice. If there is not music in our life, it's not good. I like to go to music concert, choir and orchestra. I think Live music is best to me. Recently, I went to the guitar concert and it was good. Thank you.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Ms. [Name]!

Thanks for answering your homework and sharing your thoughts about our topic.

Music is everywhere as they say and I guess we cannot live without music.

It cannot be easily removed in our life.
Anyway, thanks for you time!
See you again!

Always,
Kathrine ^^


If you could listen to one song for the rest of your life, which song would you choose?


 I think my friend who likes listening music.

>>  I am thinking of my friend who likes to listen to music.

>> or: I am thinking of my friend who likes listening to music.

She has great stereo that is very old and expensive.

>>  She has a great stereo which is very old and expensive.

When she do yoga, she listen to music.

>>  When she is doing yoga, she listens to the music.

She also has a lot of LPs(long-playing record).

>>  correct!

I listened to the music when I went to the house.

>>  I listened to the music when I went to her house. 

I think that the feeling is different and sound is good.

>>  correct!

However I can\'t distinguish easily.

>>  However, I can\'t distinguish it easily.

I usually listen to music while taking a shower or washing the dish.

>>  I usually listen to music while taking a shower or washing the dishes.

>> or: I am usually listening to music while taking a shower or washing the dishes.

I usually don\'t choose music just hear it through radio or internet.

>>  I usually do not choose the music since I am just listening it on the radio or on the internet.

I like pop song, CCM(Contemporary Christian music) and classic but I don\'t like Rock music.

>>  correct!

Whenever I listen to it, I get a stress.

>>  Whenever I listen to it, I get stressed.

However I know that rock\'n roll singer is nice.

>>  However I know that the rock\'n roll singer is nice.

If there is not music in our life, it\'s not good.

>>  if there is no music in our life, it\'s not good.

I like to go to music concert, choir and orchestra.

>>  I like to go to a music concert, choir and orchestra.

I think Live music is best to me.

>>  correct!

Recently, I went to the guitar concert and it was good.

>>  Recently, I went to a guitar concert which was good.

Thank you.

>>  correct!

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