Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ms. [Name]!
Thanks for answering your homework and sharing your thoughts about our topic.
Music is everywhere as they say and I guess we cannot live without music.
It cannot be easily removed in our life.
Anyway, thanks for you time!
See you again!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
If you could listen to one song for the rest of your life, which song would you choose?
I think my friend who likes listening music.
>> I am thinking of my friend who likes to listen to music.
>> or: I am thinking of my friend who likes listening to music.
She has great stereo that is very old and expensive.
>> She has a great stereo which is very old and expensive.
When she do yoga, she listen to music.
>> When she is doing yoga, she listens to the music.
She also has a lot of LPs(long-playing record).
>> correct!
I listened to the music when I went to the house.
>> I listened to the music when I went to her house.
I think that the feeling is different and sound is good.
>> correct!
However I can\'t distinguish easily.
>> However, I can\'t distinguish it easily.
I usually listen to music while taking a shower or washing the dish.
>> I usually listen to music while taking a shower or washing the dishes.
>> or: I am usually listening to music while taking a shower or washing the dishes.
I usually don\'t choose music just hear it through radio or internet.
>> I usually do not choose the music since I am just listening it on the radio or on the internet.
I like pop song, CCM(Contemporary Christian music) and classic but I don\'t like Rock music.
>> correct!
Whenever I listen to it, I get a stress.
>> Whenever I listen to it, I get stressed.
However I know that rock\'n roll singer is nice.
>> However I know that the rock\'n roll singer is nice.
If there is not music in our life, it\'s not good.
>> if there is no music in our life, it\'s not good.
I like to go to music concert, choir and orchestra.
>> I like to go to a music concert, choir and orchestra.
I think Live music is best to me.
>> correct!
Recently, I went to the guitar concert and it was good.
>> Recently, I went to a guitar concert which was good.
Thank you.
>> correct!
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