homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1.He
2.It
3.They
4.It
5.We
6.They
7.He
8.She
9.She
10.You
My fishes and corals healthy now.
There are no fishes who die.
But Sun Polyp is becoming die.
I'm so sad about that.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Tom!
Wow! Congratulations! You got a perfect score! Yehey!
Keep up the good work! Teacher is really proud of you.^^
Oh! I\'m sorry to hear about that news. I hope your Sun Polyp will be better.
I know that you treasure all of your corals and fishes.^^ Think positive! Cheer up Tom!
I\'m excited to hear your speech again.^^ Teacher Nina
1.He
>> Correct! 2.It
>> Correct! 3.They
>> Correct! 4.It
>> Correct! 5.We
>> Correct! 6.They
>> Correct! 7.He
>> Correct! 8.She
>> Correct! 9.She
>> Correct! 10.You
>> Correct! My fishes and corals healthy now.
>> My fishes and corals are healthy now.There are no fishes who die.
>> No fishes died.
>> OR: There were no fishes that died.But Sun Polyp is becoming die.
>> But the Sun Polyp is dying.I\'m so sad about that.
>> Correct! >> OR: I\'m so sad about it.
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