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2014-04-09 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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Good day! Teacher Mona. It is first time to write essay. I have reviewed your comments for lunch time. I also appreciate for your kind and active class. I try to practice unfamiliar word and do not mistake again!! Have a wonderful day! See you next class. 1. I can't join you for lunch. I am waiting for an important phone call. 2. Harrison Ford is a famous actor. He has appeared in many popular movies. 3. Susan got home very late last night and s[이름]ps in her room. 4. I have just been thinking about you when I received your email. 5. What do you think about the new anti-smoking bylaw? 6. Mr. [Name] planning to retire. He has worked at Bow Valley College for a long time. 7. It is my wife's birthday tonight and I am making a romantic dinner. 8. I was late this morning because I couldn't find my car keys. 9. . Next week when there is being a Chinook, the temperature will be warmer. 10. While I watched TV last night, I did my homework.

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Good Afternoon^^ How was your lunch? Anyway, thank you so much for your compliment! Thank you also for doing your best and doing your homework^^ Anyhow, I made some corrections! See you tomorrow^^ Enjoy the rest of your day and take care^^ ~T.Mona Good day! Teacher Mona. >> CORRECT^^It is first time to write essay. >> It\'s my first time to write an essay.I have reviewed your comments for lunch time. >> I have reviewed your comments during lunch time.I also appreciate for your kind and active class. >> I also appreciate your kindness and you being active in class.I try to practice unfamiliar word and do not mistake again!! >> I will try to practice unfamiliar words and I will not make the same mistakes again.Have a wonderful day! See you next class.>> CORRECT^^1. I can\'t join you for lunch. I am waiting for an important phone call. >> CORRECT^^2. Harrison Ford is a famous actor. He has appeared in many popular movies. >> CORRECT^^3. Susan got home very late last night and s[이름]ps in her room. >> is in her room s[이름]ping.4. I have just been thinking about you when I received your email. >> I was just thinking5. What do you think about the new anti-smoking bylaw? >> CORRECT^^6. Mr. [Name] planning to retire. He has worked at Bow Valley College for a long time. >> CORRECT^^7. It is my wife\'s birthday tonight and I am making a romantic dinner. >> CORRECT^^8. I was late this morning because I couldn\'t find my car keys. >> CORRECT^^9. . Next week when there is being a Chinook, the temperature will be warmer. >> CORRECT^^10. While I watched TV last night, I did my homework. >>  was watching

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