Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Great afternoon!
Hi there again Ms. [Name]!
How are you feeling now?
I hope that you are having a good mood now.
And good luck on your volleyball match this afternoon.
I guess one hours is not really enough to do all the things that you have mentioned. kkkk
But I am pretty sure that you will still enjoy whatever you are going to do.
I am looking forward also for next week since it is my first time to go home to my hometown since the Lunar New Year.
I hope that it will be next week already.
I know that you are looking forward to it too. ^^
Thanks for today and see you again tomorrow!
Take care!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
If you could spend one hour doing absolutely anything, what would you do?
Just one hour, it is not enough to me. Hahaha.
>> Just one /an hour is not enough for me. Hahaha
I am waiting April 16th because this day is school birthday.
>> I am waiting for April 16th because it is our school\'s foundation day.
I will not go to school at that day. kkk.
>> I will not go to school on that day. kkk
I\'d like to go hiking with my mother so my mother is waiting the day, too.
>> I\'d like to go hiking with my mother so my mother is waiting for me on that day, too.
You know, Korea\'s spring is very beautiful because of various flowers and trees.
>> correct!
We don\'t select a mountain which we will go to.
>> We haven\'t selected yet which mountain we will go to.
Furthermore we want to go shopping in a big city.
>> correct!
There is popular bakery in there.
>> There is a popular bakery there.
At first, I will go to mountain early in the morning and then I will go shopping.
>> correct!
I will also drink tea with sweet breads.
>> correct!
>> or: I will also drink tea while eating some sweet breads.
However, if I have to do for one hour, um... I will go to near park and I\'d like to read a book on a big stone or bench.
>> However, if I have to do it for one hour, um... I will go to a ear park and I\'d like to read a book while sitting on a big stone or bench.
I hope the book is very interesting. Thank you.
>> correct!
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