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2014-04-10 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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Hi, Rose!! I'm really sorry that I surprised you this morning. But here is the good news!:) My voice sounds much better now, so I think you might hear my real voice tomorrow!! (Though it doesn't sound beautiful, but it would be much better than this morning's voice.) And about the subject you gave me, I think people tend to get along better with people who are like them than with those who are very different from them. I think people tend to be with those who are alike them because they feel more comfortable. It's true that you have to compromise more when you are with different people. However I think hanging out with only those who are like you isn't good. Sometimes it might be more fun to be with different people and you could have a different point of view. Bye:) Have a great day:)

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Hi there, [이름]! Good morning! Like I told you, your voice was like a monster\'s but I know your face is like a princess\' Ha! Ha! Thanks for sending in your homework and I am expecting to hear your golden voice later! Hi, Rose!! I\'m really sorry that I surprised you this morning. >>CORRECT! >>Hi, Rose!! I really apologize for surprising you this morning. But here is the good news! >>CORRECT! >>However, here comes the good news!:)  My voice sounds much better now, so I think you might hear my real voice tomorrow!! >>CORRECT! >>My voice sounds a lot better now, so I guess you will hear my real voice tomorrow!! (Though it doesn\'t sound beautiful, but it would be much better than this morning\'s voice.)>>(Though it doesn\'t sound beautiful, it would be much better than this morning\'s voice.)And about the subject you gave me, I think people tend to get along better with people who are like them than with those who are very different from them.>>CORRECT! >>Moreover, regarding the topic you gave me, I think people interact with their same kind well rather than those who are different from one another. I think people tend to be with those who are alike them because they feel more comfortable. >>I think people tend to be with those who are like them because they feel more comfortable. It\'s true that you have to compromise more when you are with different people. >>CORRECT! >>It is fact that you have to try to fit in more when you are with a different set of people.However I think hanging out with only those who are like you isn\'t good. >>CORRECT! >>However, I think hanging out with people like you isn\'t good.Sometimes it might be more fun to be with different people and you could have a different point of view.>>CORRECT! >>Sometimes, it might be more interesting to be with various people and you could have a different point of view about something.Bye:) >>CORRECT!Have a great day:) >>CORRECT! 

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