Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What would you consider as a great weekend?
To make a greak weekend, I must do what I love to do.It probably depends on my feeling, weather etc. When I have worked hard on weekdays, it would be better to stay home and do nothing. Otherwise, when I have done nothing special on weekdays, I would do something active and fun. I usually go out of my house and hang out with my friends or family no matter how good the weather is.
I think that having a great weekend is very important. Because it can be a rest and recharge.
강사 첨삭
Hi There GoWoon^^
Thank you for doing your homework.^^
You did a great job on your sentences. Two thumbs up! ^^
Try to vary your sentence pattterns sometimes. That is a good practice for tenses and verbs.
I love your idea about weekends and I think we both deserve good weekends
and of course it is better to spend the weekend having had a great time in English class.
Take care always^^
T.Debby
Here are my corrections for you:
To make a greak weekend, I must do what I love to do.
>> CORRECT
OR> I must be able to do what I wish to have a good weekend.
It probably depends on my feeling, weather etc.
>> CORRECT
OR> The weather and my mood would also be factors.
When I have worked hard on weekdays, it would be better to stay home and do nothing.
>> CORRECT
OR> When I spent my weekend at work, I think it is best to rest after.
Otherwise, when I have done nothing special on weekdays, I would do something active and fun.
>> CORRECT
OR> Or if I don\'t have any special plans, I\'d go out and do something fun.
I usually go out of my house and hang out with my friends or family no matter how good the weather is.
>> CORRECT
OR> I go and meet other people despite ant weather conditions.I think that having a great weekend is very important. Because it can be a rest and recharge.
>> I think that having a great weekend is very important because it can be a rest and recharging time.
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