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2014-04-10 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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What would you consider as a great weekend? To make a greak weekend, I must do what I love to do.It probably depends on my feeling, weather etc. When I have worked hard on weekdays, it would be better to stay home and do nothing. Otherwise, when I have done nothing special on weekdays, I would do something active and fun. I usually go out of my house and hang out with my friends or family no matter how good the weather is. I think that having a great weekend is very important. Because it can be a rest and recharge.

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Hi There GoWoon^^   Thank you for doing your homework.^^ You did a great job on your sentences. Two thumbs up! ^^ Try to vary your sentence pattterns sometimes. That is a good practice for tenses and verbs. I love your idea about weekends and I think we both deserve good weekends and of course it is better to spend the weekend having had a great time in English class. Take care always^^   T.Debby   Here are my corrections for you: To make a greak weekend, I must do what I love to do. >> CORRECT OR> I must be able to do what I wish to have a good weekend. It probably depends on my feeling, weather etc. >> CORRECT OR> The weather and my mood would also be factors. When I have worked hard on weekdays, it would be better to stay home and do nothing. >> CORRECT OR> When I spent my weekend  at work, I think it is best to rest after. Otherwise, when I have done nothing special on weekdays, I would do something active and fun. >> CORRECT OR> Or if I don\'t have any special plans, I\'d go out and do something fun. I usually go out of my house and hang out with my friends or family no matter how good the weather is. >> CORRECT OR> I go and meet other people despite ant weather conditions.I think that having a great weekend is very important. Because it can be a rest and recharge. >> I think that having a great weekend is very important because it can be a rest and recharging time.

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