homework
학생이 쓴 원문
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Hi there Mr. [이름]!
Well, I have a question.
What do you mean by \"vacuum\"?
Do you mean it as the \"space\"?
Anyway, tell me more about it tomorrow.
See you again!
Thanks for today!
Enjoy your day too!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Composition: If you could spend one hour doing absolutely anything, what would you do?
I would like to go out into space.
>> I would like to go out to space.
I have wondered the vacum since the childhood.
>> I have wondered about the vacuum since childhood.
If I were in space, I would take a space swim.
>> If I were in space, I would swim.
And I want to go to the Mars.
>> And I want to go to Mars.
I know that the Mars is made up of both liquid and gas.
>> I know that Mars is made out od both liquid and gas.
I would love to experience its evironment.
>> correct!
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