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2014-04-10 · 첨삭 강사 May

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In your opinion, what's the most delicious fruit? For me, the best fruit is daragon fruit. when I was working in Singapore, I say dragon fruit first time. for the first time when I saw that, it was very unfamiliar.the suface of fruit was a intense(or impactive) pink and came out like thorn but not hard. however after peeling the fruit, it was very white studded with black small thing that looks like a seed or sesame. looking was very strange however taste was so sweet. that I never ever taste in Korea. so now after leaving Singapore, I miss that fruit mostly.

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Hi [이름]! ^^ Thank you for doing your homework. I know you\'ve been very busy. I really appreciate it! By the way, how are you doing? I haven\'t talked to you for how many days. I hope to see you later. Again, thank you! And see you later! Have a wonderful Thursday night! ~T.May   In your opinion, what\'s the most delicious fruit? >> CORRECT!For me, the best fruit is daragon fruit. >>For me, the best fruit is a dragon fruit. when I was working in Singapore, I say dragon fruit first time. >> It was my first time to see a dragon fruit, when I worked in Singapore. for the first time when I saw that, it was very unfamiliar. >> The first time I saw it, it was really unfamiliar. >>OR: It was very unfamiliar the first time I saw it. the suface of fruit was a intense(or impactive) pink and came out like thorn but not hard. >> The color of the fruit is pink which is surrounded with thorn-like things. however after peeling the fruit, it was very white studded with black small thing that looks like a seed or sesame. >> However, after peeling the fruit, it is very white studded with black small things that look like sesame seeds. looking was very strange however taste was so sweet. that I never ever taste in Korea. >> It looks strange, however, it tastes is really sweet that I haven\'t encountered any of them here in Korea. so now after leaving Singapore, I miss that fruit mostly. >> I really missed that fruit when I went back to Korea. >>OR: I really missed that fruit when I came back to Korea.

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