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2014-04-10 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Children should sometimes be allowed to use social networking sites. Because they should know about world and social. But they have to be careful with watching social networking sites.

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Good afternoon to you Tom!Thank you for sending this essay today. I totally agree with you.^^ You were able to express your thoughts well. Are you a member of a social networking site? How often do you use it? Do you think being a member of a social networking site is helpful for you? Share your ideas in class. See you! Teacher Nina   Children should sometimes be allowed to use social networking sites. >> Children should be allowed to use social networking sites sometimes. Because they should know about world and social. >> Did you mean: Because they should know something about the world or society. But they have to be careful with watching social networking sites. >> But they have to be careful when watching something on social networking sites. >> OR: But they have to be careful when using social networking sites.

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