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2014-04-10 · 첨삭 강사 Paula

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hi i am studying the power english. i received second class. it isn't easy to study english. what is the method that english is well? my family will move other place. we here has lived for 3 years. i plan to buy a house. but money that i have is lack. so we must receive lending.

강사 첨삭

Hi Jehee!

Happy Thursday!

 

Thank you for making me know you well! ^^

Ah! I know studying another language is difficult.

However, through dedication and trust on your own capabilities, you will achieve the improvement you are hoping for.

In my case, it is also difficult for me to study English, but I know that I need to do it.

Studying the English language will make us more competitive in our field.

 

By the way, where and when are you and your family moving?

Is it easy for you to move to another place?

Why do you need to move?

Ah! You have a plan buy your own house, right?

That is really good.

I also have the same plan, but it is not possible now.

It is because of the same reason that I don\'t have enough money.

 

Anyway, about your composition, you did a good job!

Keep it up!

However, be careful on your capitalization.

That\'s all!

See you soon!

 

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

 

 

hi

>> Hi!
i am studying the power english.
>> I am studying at Power English.

i received second class.
>> I received the second class.

>> OR: I had the second class.

it isn\'t easy to study english.
>> It isn\'t easy to study English.

what is the method that english is well?
>> What is the method to be well at English.
my family will move other place.
>> My family will move to another place or city.

we here has lived for 3 years.
>> We have lived here for 3 years.

i plan to buy a house.
>> I plan to buy a house.

>> OR: I have a plan to buy a house.

but money that i have is lack.
>> However, my money is not enough.

>> OR: However, I have lack of money.

so we must receive lending.

>> Therefore, we must lend from other people or from the bank.

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