Homework:)
학생이 쓴 원문
I agree that small decisions often have major consequences.
That's why we have the word 'Butterfly Effect'; The flap of wings of a small butterfly can cause a typhoon in New York.
And this butterfly effect is happening to me now.
In fact, I would have my midterm tests the week after next.
And I think I would have a hard time because I have to take seven exams.
When I enrolled for classes in February, I thought I could handle all of the classes.
But now, I'm having tiring and exhausting days from Monday to Friday and always look forward to every weekend.kkk
Also when I'm on a diet, a small bite of chocolate could lead to eating tons of chocolate which screws up my whole diet.
Bye:)
Have a great day, Beautiful Rose:)
강사 첨삭
I have always told you that you are more beautiful^^
And it is no kidding! Thanks for letting me hear your golden voice this morning, [이름]!
I was really happy to hear that, and of course, I am happier that you are getting better^^
Let us forget about the monster voice and move on to your princess\' voice^^
Have a great weekend and I can not wait to see you on Monday!
I agree that small decisions often have major consequences.
>>CORRECT!
>>I agree that minor decisions can have a great impact.That\'s why we have the word \'Butterfly Effect\'; The flap of wings of a small butterfly can cause a typhoon in New York.
>>That\'s why we have the word \'butterfly effect\': the flap of the wings of a small butterfly can cause a typhoon in New York.And this butterfly effect is happening to me now.
>>CORRECT!
>>And this butterfly effect is occuring to me now.In fact, I would have my midterm tests the week after next.
>>In fact, I will have my midterm test the week after next.
>>Actually, I will have my midterm test two weeks later.And I think I would have a hard time because I have to take seven exams.
>>And I think I will have a hard time because I have to take seven mind-boggling exams.When I enrolled for classes in February, I thought I could handle all of the classes.
>>When I enrolled in classes last February, I thought I could handle all of them.But now, I\'m having tiring and exhausting days from Monday to Friday and always look forward to every weekend.kkk>>CORRECT!
>>But now, I\'m having drained- out days from Monday to Friday and always feel excited every weekend.kkkAlso when I\'m on a diet, a small bite of chocolate could lead to eating tons of chocolate which screws up my whole diet.>>CORRECT! (You made me smile there^^)
>>Furthermore, when I am on a diet, a small bite of chocolate could eventually lead to binging which screws up my whole diet.Bye:)
>>CORRECT!Have a great day, Beautiful Rose:)
>>Have a great day, beautiful Rose:)
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