Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there! Oh no worries about awhile ago, just remember that whenever you have problems I am here to advice you on the best way I can.
But still I salute you for at least participating in class today.
Just remember that sometimes it\'s not going to be easy, but with your hard work and effort I\'m telling you it\'s going to be worth it.
Keep on smiling!
Teacher Chelsea ^^
Hi Chelsea,
>>CORRECT!!
I came back to my daily from my military service.
>>I came back to my daily routine life because I came from a military service.
but my mental put down in there.
>>But my mentality state put me down when I was there.
>>OR: When I was there my mental state of being suddenly went down.
And i brought many many sea of work from my E-mail box.
>>And I received tons of work via e-mail.
>>And I received loads of work from my e-mail.
I\'m sorry for i can\'t concentrat our class in today\'s morning.
>>I am sorry for not concentrating in class awhile ago.
>>OR: I would like to apologize for not concentrating in our class awhile ago.
How about your this weekdays?
>>How was your weekday?
Um... Today\'s topic is hard.
>>CORRECT
>>OR: Oh, today\'s topic is hard.
I like the Korean movie films but I don\'t know Korean movies is popular in other country.
>>I like Korean movies but I wasn\'t aware that Korean movies is popular in other country.
Actually I don\'t have foreign friends and i don\'t know that what does it think about Korean films from abroad.
>>Actually I don\'t have foreign friends and I have no idea what is it like watching a Korean film abroad.
Have you ever seen a Korean movie? Korean actor is good handsome.
>>Have you seen a Korean movie? Korean actors are good looking.
In generally, Korean guys have attractive.
>>In general, Korean guys are attractive.
Of course there are some exception like me. kkk
>>Of course there are some exceptions like me, just kidding.
I don\'t have ever seen a movie from Philiphins. Are you recommend to me?
>>I haven\'t seen movies from the Philippines, can you recommend one best movie to me?
it is already midnight. You have good sleep and call again tomorrow.
>>It is already midnight, have a goodnight sleep and see you again tomorrow.
Bye~
>> Goodbye!
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