Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi^^
A beautiful and great Friday!
I am happy to see that you are doing your homework. It reflects your determination to improve your skills in English. With your attitude, I believe you will go further.
I am sure you watched a lot of movies and have downloaded their songs. They may have been translated in Korean language but you can also listen to the English translation. It will help you in your English. I would suggest that you keep reading grammar books too.
Have a wonderful weekend!
_T. Linn :)
I like a kind of music such as O.S.T.(original sound track).
>>I like music such as an Original Sound Track (O.S.T).
After I see adorable movies, I always search a O.S.T. and download to take it.
>>After I saw/watched movies, I always search the Original Sound Track and download it.
I haven\'t thought about reasons.
>>I haven\'t thought of any reason yet.
However, It\'s because just listening the soundtrack makes me build again an image of the movie I see.
>>However, listening to the soundtrack makes me remember the image of the movie I saw.
Since I am a person who believe that listening music should be accompanied with understanding of meaning, music in movie makes it easier like synesthesia.
>>Since I am a person who believes that listening to music should be accompanied with the understanding of its meaning, the music in the movie makes it easier like a synesthesia.
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