Homework

What would be your best advice to a friend who has failed a very important test? I have experienced many fails throughout my life. Whenever I faced with difficulty, I have overcome them with other people's story. Every people have their own issues. So, I'm not a person who face with difficulty. Besides, after listening moving story, I find the way to conquer harship. Therefore, When my friend fails a very important test and he/she is very depressed, I would say my story. How I frustrated and I overcome. Since it is a real story, I can guide my friend appropriate way by himself/herself.

 Hi there Woon^^ Thank you for making your homework.^^ It\'s always best to give an advice that you can relate to. I think that you are a very good friend to have. Keep up the good work and mind you verbs and the proper tenses. happy weekend.^^ Take care^^   T.Debby^^   Here are my corrections for you today: I have experienced many fails throughout my life. >> I have experienced many failures throughout my life. Whenever I faced with difficulty, I have overcome them with other people\'s story. >> Whenever I\'m faced with  a difficulty, I overcome them with other people\'s stories.  Every people have their own issues. So, I\'m not a person who face with difficulty. >> Each person have their own issues. So, I\'m not the only person who faces difficulties.  Besides, after listening moving story, I find the way to conquer harship. >> Besides, after listening to a moving story, I found the way to conquer harships. Therefore, When my friend fails a very important test and he/she is very depressed, I would say my story. >> Therefore, When my friend fails a very important test and he/she is very depressed, I would tell her my story. How I frustrated and I overcome. >> How I got  frustrated and how I overcame it. Since it is a real story, I can guide my friend appropriate way by himself/herself. >> Since it is a real story, I can guide my friend appropriately  by himself/herself.