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2014-04-11 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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: What would you consider as the best career? I would love to be a polyglot. Thesedays, knowing second and third language become very important. And it has power in business field whatever I do. SO I keep studying foreign languages. And I believe communication is important to best career. The most influential reason to quit someone's job is known as the problem of communication and relation in his/her group. So, the good relation based on good communication can be a essential condition.

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Hi there Woon^^   I love your answer! ^^ Yes it is always good to have a skill in omminication as it makes us very confident to deal and talk to other people who are in our personal relations or even just job related. So do your best to study English. Keep up the good work. Take care^^ Happy weekend.   T.Debby^^   Here are my corrections for you today: I would love to be a polyglot. >> CORRECT OR> I wish I am bilingual. Thesedays, knowing second and third language become very important. >> These days, knowing second and third languages became very important.  And it has power in business field whatever I do. SO I keep studying foreign languages. >> And it has power in the business fieldand in whatever I do. SO I keep studying foreign languages. And I believe communication is important to best career. >> And I believe communication is important for the best career. The most influential reason to quit someone\'s job is known as the problem of communication and relation in his/her group. >> The most influential reason to quit someone\'s job is known as the problem of communication and relationship with his/her group. So, the good relation based on good communication can be a essential condition. >> So, the good relationship based on good communication skill can be an essential condition.

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