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2014-04-11 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Would you say that learning English is a kind of adventure? Why or why not? Um... I think English is a kind of adventure. When I checked the Adventure's meaning in the dictionary, it is similar with challenge. However adventure involves damage and loss. Although learning English has a little risk of time and money, it is valueable. This is because I can get a good chance and meet wide world. I need to have courage to do it and I'd like to enjoy it. On the other hand, learning Englihs is no more adventure now. It is already part of my live. I'd like to believe that there is end of leaning English. Is it right? Sometime, I wonder whether there is end of learning English or not? Hahaha. I want to feel thrill and delight like adventure while learning English. Thank you. Have a nice weekend.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Ms. [Name]!

Well, I don\'t think there is an end when in comes to learning English, or any other things.

As they say, education is a non-stop learning.

Now that you are studying English, it is a non-stop learning.

You cannot say that you have to stop learning once your were able to converse very well.

People, if they are already good in English, still needs to study just to improve more their knowledge.
And I hope you will continue doing that too.

Anyway, hope that you will enjoy your weekend.

Have fun! Take a good rest!


Always,
Kathrine ^^



Would you say that learning English is a kind of adventure? Why or why not?

Um... I think English is a kind of adventure.

>> correct!

When I checked the Adventure\'s meaning in the dictionary, it is similar with challenge.

>> correct!

>> or: When I checked the meaning of Adventure in the dictionary, it is similar to challenge.

However adventure involves damage and loss.

>> correct!

Although learning English has a little risk of time and money, it is valueable.

>> correct!  (spelling correction-valuable)

This is because I can get a good chance and meet wide world.

>> This is because I can get a good chance to meet people around the world.

I need to have courage to do it and I\'d like to enjoy it. 

>> correct!
 On the other hand, learning Englihs is no more adventure now.

>> correct! (English)

>> or: On the other hand, learning English is not an adventure anymore.

It is already part of my live.

>> It is already a part of my life.

I\'d like to believe that there is end of leaning English. Is it right?

>> I\'d like to believe that there is an end of leaning English. Is it right?

Sometime, I wonder whether there is end of learning English or not? Hahaha. 

>> Sometimes, I wonder whether there is an end in learning English or not? Hahaha.
 I want to feel thrill and delight like adventure while learning English.

>> I want to feel the thrill and delight like an adventure while learning English.
 Thank you. Have a nice weekend.

>> correct!

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