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2014-04-14 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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Hi Chelsea. Yes, this weekday is toooooo long. but we finally reached the end of this weekday and today is Friday. I am happy. kk Today's topic is "If you were a song, what song would you be and why?" I will sing a delight song for Friday!! I usually like to listen a quiet song like New-age classic song, such as Yuhki-Kuramoto's song and Last Carnival. But when i needed a exciting song, I absolutely choose a Hip-Hop songs. The powerful rhythm in Hip-Hop is good for forget stress from daily work. So I will go to club because today is Friday. kkk Do you like the club? What about Philippine's club? There is fun too? I hope enjoy your the Friday. Goodnight and see you on Monday. Bye~

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Good Morning^^ Thank you for doing your homework^^ I made some corrections and I hope I was able to meet your points. Wow! your grammar has highly improved! Keep it up! See you later! ~T.Chelsea Hi Chelsea. Yes, this weekday is toooooo long. but we finally reached the end of this weekday and today is Friday. I am happy. kk>> Hi Chelsea. Yes, this weekday is so long. But we finally reached the end of this weesday and today is Friday. I am happy. Kkk.Today\'s topic is \"If you were a song, what song would you be and why?\">> CORRECT^^^I will sing a delight song for Friday!!>> CORRECT^^I usually like to listen a quiet song like New-age classic song, such as Yuhki-Kuramoto\'s song and Last Carnival. >> I usually like listening to a mellow songs like new-age classic ongs, such as Yuhki0Kuramoto\'s song and Last Carnival. But when i needed a exciting song, I absolutely choose a Hip-Hop songs. >> But when I need an exciting song, I absolutely choose hip-hop songs.The powerful rhythm in Hip-Hop is good for forget stress from daily work. >> The powerful rhythm of hip-hop is good to relieve stress from your daily work.So I will go to club because today is Friday. kkk>> So I will go to the club because today is Friday. Kkk/Do you like the club? What about Philippine\'s club? There is fun too?>> Do you like going to the club? What about Philippine\'s club? Is it also fun?I hope enjoy your the Friday.>> I hope you enjoy your Friday.Goodnight and see you on Monday.>> CORRECT^^Bye~ >> CORRECT^^

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