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2014-04-14 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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There are a lot of ways to communicate with others other than talking, so I don't think talking is the most effective and satisfying way of communicating with others. I think it depends on the situations. Of course when you meet someone for the first time, talking would be the first and best communication which you can use. And when you get close to someone, talking still can be one of the communications you use but there are also the other ways to interact . For example, you could play with someone and do activities(like hobbies) together. However it's true that talking is a basic to communication. Have a great day, Rose:) Bye:)

강사 첨삭

[이름]! I can not wait to hear your voice^^ I really hope that you have fully recovered~ Anyways, I have inserted some expressions as alternatives to yours *_* Of course, you can freely use them~^^ There are a lot of ways to communicate with others other than talking, so I don\'t think talking is the most effective and satisfying way of communicating with others. >>CORRECT! >>There are vast methods to communicate with others other than talking, so I do not think that it is the most effective and satisfying way to  convey information. I think it depends on the situations. >>I think it depends on the situation.Of course when you meet someone for the first time, talking would be the first and best communication which you can use. >>CORRECT! >>It is absolutely right that when we meet someone for the first time, speaking to him or her is the best way to reach out.And when you get close to someone, talking still can be one of the communications you use but there are also the other ways to interact. >>CORRECT! >>And when you get close to someone, conversation can still one of the modes of communication; however, there are also alternatives. For example, you could play with someone and do activities(like hobbies) together.>>CORRECT! >>For instance, you could play with someone and share a hobby.However it\'s true that talking is a basic to communication.>>However, it\'s true that talking is a basic to communication.>>On the other hand, it is true that talking is a fundamental to communication.Have a great day, Rose:) >>CORRECT!Bye:) >>CORRECT!

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