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Hi there Ms. [Name]!
Well, I guess your book would be inspiring in the future.
And that your children and other people will be inspired by the experiences that you had before.
Thanks for sharing you answer!
See you tomorrow!
Take care!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
If you wrote a book, what would you write about?
I\'d like to write a book yet I don\'t find a topic.
>> I\'d like to write a book yet I haven\'t found the topic.
I think topic is the most important in writing so it is very difficult.
>> I think that the topic is the most important thing in writing so it is very difficult.
I heard that anyone write a book about themselves at first.
>> I heard that anyone can write a book about themselves at first.
Therefore, I will write a book like essay related on my job, hobby, family, friends and so on.
>> Therefore, I will write a book like an essay which is related to my job, hobby, family, friends and so on.
People express their thinking in arts such as dance, song and writing.
>> correct!
Writing is better to me.
>> Writing is better for me.
If I write a book, I will write letter to my children about my childhood, dream and philosophy.
>> correct!
It is not just letter.
>> correct!
It is book and history.
>> correct!
I will emphasize that happy and enjoyable life.
>> I will emphasize about the happy and enjoyable life.
At that time, my mind can change.
>> correct!
I will also write a fairy tale for children or adult.
>> correct!
I need abundance imagination.
>> I need an abundant imagination.
It will give a lot of lesson and fun.
>> correct!
Thank you.
>> correct!
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