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2014-04-14 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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My best restaurant is "manong" The steak and pasta are is very delicious. Pasta is not greesy and steak is very soft. I love that restaurant.

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A fine day to you Tom! Wow! I really love eating pasta especially Carbonara.^^ It\'s nice that you found a restaurant that serves good food. It is really difficult to find a place where we will be satisfied with the food we eat. I hope to taste those foods in the future in that restaurant. Let us talk more about this in class. See you!Teacher Nina   My best restaurant is \"manong\" >> Correct >> OR: My best restaurant is \"Manong\".The steak and pasta are is very delicious. >> The steak and pasta that are served there are very delicious. >> OR: Their steak and pasta are very delicious. Pasta is not greesy and steak is very soft. >> The pasta is not greasy and the steak is very soft. >> OR: The pasta that they serve is not greasy and the steak is very soft. I love that restaurant. >> Correct >> OR: I love eating in that restaurant.

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