Homework:)

Hi, Rose!! As I read your feedback, I regret that I gave you tiring and exhausting comments this morning.(Like tiring Monday:() Thanks to your positive comments, I think I had a quite good day rather than tiring one.:) Thank you:) From now on, I will try to be full of energy even Monday morning.kkk And I really agree that my composition looks much better when it's expressed in the other way by you:)!! And regarding the topic you gave me, I think whether deception could be justified or not depends on the situation. If it is intended for valid and good reasons, it could be justified in some aspects. However if it is intended for ill-natured reasons, it could never be forgiven. So I think that trying not to make deceptions or only telling the truths is the best way not to hurt anyone including me. Therefore I should live a shameless and healthy life. Kkkk Bye:)

Hi there, [이름]! It is Tuesday and I am so happy to start my day seeing your composition! Thanks for being so wonderful especially in the morning! Mornings are great because of you! Anyways, I have incorporated some expressions to perk up your paragraph which is already wonderful~ Take note of the punctuation marks you use^^ Have a great day! Hi, Rose!! >>CORRECT!  As I read your feedback, I regret that I gave you tiring and exhausting comments this morning.(Like tiring Monday:()>>As I read your feedback, I regret that I gave you exhausting comments this morning.(Like tiring Monday:()>>As I checked your feedback over, I regret that I uttered exhausting comments this morning.(Like tiring Monday:()Thanks to your positive comments, I think I had a quite good day rather than tiring one.:) >>Thanks to your positive comments, I think I had a quite good day rather than a tiring one.:) >>Through your comments, I think I had a quite pleasant day rather than a daunting one. Thank you:) >>CORRECT!From now on, I will try to be full of energy even Monday morning.kkk >>From now on, I will try to be full of energy even on a Monday morning.kkkAnd I really agree that my composition looks much better when it\'s expressed in the other way by you:)!! >>CORRECT! >>Moreover, I totally agree that my composition looks much better when it is expressed unconventionally by you.And regarding the topic you gave me, I think whether deception could be justified or not depends on the situation. >>CORRECT! >>About the topic you gave me, I think deception could be justified depending on the situation or circumstance.If it is intended for valid and good reasons, it could be justified in some aspects. >>If it is intended for valid or good reasons, it could be justified in some aspects.However if it is intended for ill-natured reasons, it could never be forgiven. >>However, if it is intended for ill-natured reasons, it could never be forgiven.So I think that trying not to make deceptions or only telling the truths is the best way not to hurt anyone including me.>>So I think that trying not to make deceptions and just telling the truth are the best ways not to hurt anyone including me. Therefore I should live a shameless and healthy life. Kkkk>>CORRECT! >>So, I should live a life full of health but without shame. Ha! Ha!Bye:) >>CORRECT!