Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Chelsea.
I'm finishing late my homework today. After Spring come, I'm getting used to my busy work.
I don't have enough time for English study. I feel the lack of time. :( Fighting.
Today's topic is "Should a good mother give up her job to stay at home with her children?"
There is no satandard of the good mother. so there is no answer.
I think the best way is happy with each other.
It is the good mother who love her children is. Even though she has work or not has work.
I think so. kkk
It's already midnight. I'm going to bed. Goodnight.
P.S
Listen to the "Last Carnival" -> (www.youtube.com/watch?v=lMUhjDeEPfA)
You can feel like a princess. Try it. kk Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hi there^^
Thank you for doing your homework^^
I made some corrections and I hope that I was able to meet your points.
I agree with you! I think that the love, care and attention the mother gives to her children is the real standard of being a good mother.
Parents work hard for them to provide a better life for their children. But, financial and material things are not enough. So I think it\'s just time management.
Let\'s talk more about this in our class^^
Have a great day and I\'ll call you tomorrow^^
~T.Chelsea
Hi Chelsea.>> CORRECT^^I\'m finishing late my homework today.
>> I\'m finished my homework late today.
After Spring come, I\'m getting used to my busy work.
>> After Spring came, I usually get busy at work.I don\'t have enough time for English study.
>> I don\'t have enough time to study English.
I feel the lack of time. :( Fighting.>> I that I lack of time. :( Fighting!Today\'s topic is \"Should a good mother give up her job to stay at home with her children?\">> CORRECT^^There is no satandard of the good mother. so there is no answer. >> There is no standard of being a good mother, so there I don\'t have an answer.I think the best way is happy with each other.>> I think it is the best way is to be happy with each other.It is the good mother who love her children is.
>> I think that a good mother loves her children.
Even though she has work or not has work.>> Even though she\'s working or not.I think so. kkk>> CORRECT^^It\'s already midnight. I\'m going to bed. Goodnight.>> CORRECT^^P.SListen to the \"Last Carnival\" -> (www.youtube.com/watch?v=lMUhjDeEPfA)
>> CORRECT^^You can feel like a princess. Try it. kk Bye.
>> You\'ll feel like you\'re a princess. Try it. Kkk. Bye.
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