Homework

2014-04-15 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Grammmar is important. So I always keep my eyes open to use grammar correctly. But it's not easy to use correctly especially in dialogue. I should remember words, grammars, tenses, etc in a few seconds. Of course I practice remmembering these every day. I believe it will be better. <Homework> The best gift I have ever given is love. I have given my parents love every day. This can't be compared with anything. You also give your daughter love every day, too. Isn't it? And your daughter too.

강사 첨삭

Hello there, [이름].

Grammar is really very important, so we need to remember it all the time.

Love is the best gift we can give to everybody.

Take care and have a nice day in school.

T. Jeny

 

Grammmar is important.

>>correct

So I always keep my eyes open to use grammar correctly.

>>So, I always keep my eyes open to use grammar correctly.

But it\'s not easy to use correctly especially in dialogue.

>>But, it\'s not easy to use it correctly especially in a dialogue.

I should remember words, grammars, tenses, etc in a few seconds.

>>correct
Of course I practice remmembering these every day.

>>Of course, I practice to remember these every day.
I believe it will be better.

>>correct

<Homework>
The best gift I have ever given is love.

>>The best gift, I have ever given is love.

I have given my parents love every day.

>>I give love to my parents every day.

This can\'t be compared with anything.

>>correct

You also give your daughter love every day, too.

>>You also love your daughter love everyday.

Isn\'t it? And your daughter too.

>>correct

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