Homework;)
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Hi, Rose:)
First, I want to say that I also did enjoy today's class.:)
I wish I could speak English like today always!
And I was surprised to know that there is a spider which is as big as my palm.
Actually I measured my palm today and it is 18cm.kkk
I think I'm lucky that I haven't seen my palm-sized spiders until now.Haha!
And what does 'mym' mean?
And regarding the topic you gave me, I think conscience is a more powerful motivator than money, fame, or power.
I think conscience is the best motivation because it's the stimulant that can motivate you much longer than other things.
You could do something to earn money or fame or power. But that might not last long because it's the other things that you want not the goal itself.
But in terms of conscience, you do something because you know how much you want it or how important it is.
You do something because of your will to do it, so you could be motivated more and longer.
Bye:)
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Happy Wednesday, [이름]!
I had a great time too! Ha! Ha!
I enjoy every topic we talk about!
Maybe because you are so bubbly and game for everything?
Luckily, you have not seen a spider like that T^T
It is a common sight here in the Philippines^^
One thing more, do you know that in the Amazon, spiders are even as big as plates?
Whew, that is horrifying~
Hi, Rose:)
>>CORRECT!First, I want to say that I also did enjoy today\'s class.:)
>>CORRECT!
>>First, let me tell you that I was also fascinated with the class today^^I wish I could speak English like today always!
>>I wish I could always speak English like that! And I was surprised to know that there is a spider which is as big as my palm.
>>CORRECT!Actually I measured my palm today and it is 18cm.kkk
>>Actually, I measured my palm today and it is 18cm.kkkI think I\'m lucky that I haven\'t seen my palm-sized spiders until now.Haha!
>>I think I\'m lucky that I haven\'t seen palm-sized spiders until now.Haha!And what does \'mym\' mean?>>CORRECT!And regarding the topic you gave me, I think conscience is a more powerful motivator than money, fame, or power.
>>CORRECT!
>>And regarding the topic you gave me, I think conscience is a more powerful driving force than money, fame, or power.I think conscience is the best motivation because it\'s the stimulant that can motivate you much longer than other things.
>>CORRECT!
>>I think conscience is the best motivation because it\'s the stimulant that can encourage you much longer than other things.You could do something to earn money or fame or power.
>>CORRECT!
>>You could do something to make money or rise to fame and obtain power.
But that might not last long because it\'s the other things that you want not the goal itself.
>>But that might not last long because other things are more important than the goal itself.But in terms of conscience, you do something because you know how much you want it or how important it is.
>>CORRECT!
>>But regarding conscience, you keep on doing something because you are aware how much you want it or how significant it is.You do something because of your will to do it, so you could be motivated more and longer.>>CORRECT!Bye:)
>>CORRECT!
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