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2014-04-16 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Spending time reading a dictionary? Oh, Jeny, are you serious? Although I'm thinking that, I'm being bored. It may help me understand the words. But I would rather study with textbook. Anyway, have a good time today! <Homework> I want to change the time when I fell out with my friend. The reason to fell out with my friend was not big thing. That was a trivial thing. If I had conceded to my friend first, We didn't fall out each other. That was a huge mistake.

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Hello there, [이름] I know that sometimes we feel indifferent from our friends, but I guess we need to push ourselves to move our feet forward to be a better person and to overcome fear in our hearts. In that way, we can change in a good way. T, Jeny   Spending time reading a dictionary? >>correctOh, Jeny, are you serious? >>correctAlthough I\'m thinking that, I\'m being bored. >>I\'m already bored thinking about that.It may help me understand the words. >>correctBut I would rather study with textbook.>>But, I would rather study with a textbook.Anyway, have a good time today!>>correct<Homework>I want to change the time when I fell out with my friend >>I want to change the time when I felt left out with my friend. The reason to fell out with my friend was not big thing. >>The reason why I felt that way is not a big thing. That was a trivial thing. >>correct  If I had conceded to my friend first, We didn\'t fall out each other.>> If I had conceded my friend first, we won\'t feel that way. That was a huge mistake. >>correct  

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