Homework
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Spending time reading a dictionary?
Oh, Jeny, are you serious? Although I'm thinking that, I'm being bored.
It may help me understand the words. But I would rather study with textbook.
Anyway, have a good time today!
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I want to change the time when I fell out with my friend.
The reason to fell out with my friend was not big thing. That was a trivial thing. If I had conceded to my friend first, We didn't fall out each other.
That was a huge mistake.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, [이름]
I know that sometimes we feel indifferent from our friends, but I guess we need to push ourselves to move our feet forward to be a better person and to overcome fear in our hearts.
In that way, we can change in a good way.
T, Jeny
Spending time reading a dictionary?
>>correctOh, Jeny, are you serious?
>>correctAlthough I\'m thinking that, I\'m being bored.
>>I\'m already bored thinking about that.It may help me understand the words.
>>correctBut I would rather study with textbook.>>But, I would rather study with a textbook.Anyway, have a good time today!>>correct<Homework>I want to change the time when I fell out with my friend
>>I want to change the time when I felt left out with my friend.
The reason to fell out with my friend was not big thing.
>>The reason why I felt that way is not a big thing.
That was a trivial thing.
>>correct
If I had conceded to my friend first, We didn\'t fall out each other.>> If I had conceded my friend first, we won\'t feel that way.
That was a huge mistake.
>>correct
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