Homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Chelsea.
I'm sorry for doing my homework late.
Anyway, today my homework's topic is "If you could change any aspect of your personality, what would it be?"
If can i choice my personality, I want to choice a brave.
If I'm brave when i was young, I would go to travel another part of world.
Sometime I regret that I didn't go another country when I have a lot of free time in student ages.
OH, Apr 18th is Easter. Did you attend Easter egg competition on the our wep site?
Bye, See you tomorrow.
강사 첨삭
Hi there^^
Thank you for doing your homework even though it\'s late^^
Yes, I joined the Easter egg competition and I will tell you the details later!
You are still very young, so you can still travel around the world.
Let\'s talk more about this in our class!
Rise and Shine~
~T.Chelsea
Hi Chelsea.
>> CORRECT^^I\'m sorry for doing my homework late. >> CORRECT^^Anyway, today my homework\'s topic is \"If you could change any aspect of your personality, what would it be?\">> CORRECT^^If can i choice my personality, I want to choice a brave.
>> If I can choose my personality, I want to be brave.
>> If I can change my personality, I want to be brave.If I\'m brave when i was young, I would go to travel another part of world.
>> If I was brave when I was young, I would have traveled around the world.Sometime I regret that I didn\'t go another country when I have a lot of free time in student ages.>> Sometimes, I regret not going to another country when I had a lot of free time.OH, Apr 18th is Easter. Did you attend Easter egg competition on the our wep site?>> Oh, April 18 is easter. Did you join the Eastrer egg competition on out website?Bye, See you tomorrow.
>> CORRECT^^
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