Homework.

2014-04-17 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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Hi there Chelsea. I'm doing second my homework. When we're doing acting in our class book such as Dialogue, I think we're getting used to acting in our book dialogue.kkkk Anyway my homework's topic is "If you are to make a law for Korea, what kind of law or rule would you make?" If i can make a law for Korea, I will make a rule "Korean should have a time to rest every 3 hours in a day." Actually I need a time to rest. I'm doing my homework in my office with secret so i will finish this. My boss will do to call to me a 30 minute later for our business meeting. Bye Chelsea. See you tomorrow. Goodnight.

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Hi there again Luke!! Hahaha. I hope you\'ll not get caught by your boss! Anyway, thanks for doing your homeowork! I like the law you want to make! Kkkk I\'ll see you late! ~T.Chelsea Hi there Chelsea.>> CORRECT!I\'m doing second my homework. >> CORRECT!When we\'re doing acting in our class book such as Dialogue, I think we\'re getting used to acting in our book dialogue.kkkk>> When we do the dialogue in our class, I think we are acting it real. KkkAnyway my homework\'s topic is \"If you are to make a law for Korea, what kind of law or rule would you make?\">> CORRECT!If i can make a law for Korea, I will make a rule \"Korean should have a time to rest every 3 hours in a day.\" >> If I were to make a law for Korea, I would make a rule that \"Korean should have to takeActually I need a time to rest.>> Actually, I need time to rest.I\'m doing my homework in my office with secretso i will finish this. >> I\'m doing my homework in my office in secret. My boss will do to call to me a 30 minute later for our business meeting.>> My boss will call me in 30 minutes for our business meeting.Bye Chelsea. See you tomorrow.Goodnight. >> CORRECT^^

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