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Are there any famous people you would like to meet? Who and what would you say to him/her?
There are a lot of famous people who I respect. I can listen and read their story on great program like Ted. However meeting is best way to get a strong impression. I'd like to meet diplomat, Bangimun. He is UN secretary general. He is Korean but he is working for world. I will ask him 'What is your know-how that you have a good skill in English speech.' I also wonder his vision for future and I want to listen hot world news. If I can help for the work, I want to it. I'd like to meet Nick vujicic, too. Do you know him? I read book about him. He has positive energy so I can get one. Although he doesn't have arms and legs, he live healthy and brightly. I wonder his secret. I have his book so I want to get his signature on the book. These day, mess media developed so we can meet them easily anytime and anywhere but it is not directly. Just the thought of it makes me happy. Thank you.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ms. [Name]!
I know that it is not a great evening now in your country because of the sad news about the ship which sank and that most of the passengers are students.
The news is really heartbreaking.
I hope that the families of those passengers will be strong to be able to overcome this situation now.
Talk to you tomorrow.
Always,
Kathrine
Are there any famous people you would like to meet? Who and what would you say to him/her?
There are a lot of famous people who I respect.
>> correct!
I can listen and read their story on great program like Ted.
>> I can listen and read their story on a great program like Ted.
However meeting is best way to get a strong impression.
>> However meeting them is the best way to get a strong impression.
I\'d like to meet diplomat, Bangimun.
>> I\'d like to meet the diplomat, Ban Ki Moon.
He is UN secretary general.
>> He is the UN secretary general.
He is Korean but he is working for world.
>> He is a Korean but he is working for the world.
I will ask him \'What is your know-how that you have a good skill in English speech.\'
>> correct!
I also wonder his vision for future and I want to listen hot world news.
>> I also wonder about his vision for the future and I want to listen the hot world news.
>> I am also wondering about his vision for the future and I want to listen the hot world news.
If I can help for the work, I want to it.
>> If I can help on the work, I want to do it.
I\'d like to meet Nick vujicic, too.
>> correct!
Do you know him?
>> correct!
I read book about him.
>> I read a book about him.
>> I have read a book about him.
He has positive energy so I can get one.
>> He has a positive energy so I can be one like him too.
Although he doesn\'t have arms and legs, he live healthy and brightly.
>> Although he doesn\'t have arms and legs, he lives healthy and brightly.
I wonder his secret.
>> I wonder about his secret.
>> I am wondering about his secret.
I have his book so I want to get his signature on the book.
>> correct!
These day, mess media developed so we can meet them easily anytime and anywhere but it is not directly.
>> These day, mass media has been developed so we can meet them easily anytime and anywhere but not directly.
Just the thought of it makes me happy. Thank you.
>> correct!
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