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2014-04-17 · 첨삭 강사 Janice

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1. He correctly defined the terms. The answer sounded correct 2. She quickly adjusted the fees. She adapted quickly) to any situation. 3. He measured the floor exactly. They proved to be perfectly exact measurements. 4. The stillness of the tomb was awful. The tomb was awfully still. 5. It was a , dangerous lake to swim in. The man was dangerously drunk. The gas smelled dangerous 6. She performed magnificently. It was a magnificent, beautiful performance. 7. Her voice sounds beautiful. She sang the song exactly as it was written. We heard it perfectly, 8. He was a very sensible) person. He acted very sensibly). 9. Mike wrote too slowly on the exam. He always writes slowly. 10. Talk softly or don't talk at all. The music played softly.

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Hello there Sir [이름]!   How are you doing so far? It\'s my pleasure having a class with you. I want to thank you for taking some of your time just to have your homework done. It\'s very much appreciated. Anyway, kindly check the correction I made below if you have time. You should have gotten a perfect score. However, you forgot to omit or put the punctuations needed. So next time, Be very careful with the punctuations you put in a sentence because it would change the meaning of the statement. If you have questions, feel free to raise it during our class.   See you again in our class Sir [이름]! Teacher Janice   1. He correctly defined the terms. The answer sounded correct >> He correctly defined the terms. The answer sounded correct.2. She quickly adjusted the fees. She adapted quickly) to any situation.>> She quickly adjusted the fees. She adapted quickly to any situation.3. He measured the floor exactly. They proved to be perfectly exact measurements.>> Correct 4. The stillness of the tomb was awful. The tomb was awfully still.>> Correct 5. It was a , dangerous lake to swim in. The man was dangerously drunk. The gas smelled dangerous>> It was a dangerous lake to swim in. The man was dangerously drunk. The gas smelled dangeorus.6. She performed magnificently. It was a magnificent, beautiful performance.>> She performed magnificently. It was a magnificently beautiful performance.7. Her voice sounds beautiful. She sang the song exactly as it was written. We heard it perfectly, >> Correct 8. He was a very sensible) person. He acted very sensibly).>> He was a very sensible person. He acted very sensibly.9. Mike wrote too slowly on the exam. He always writes slowly.>> Correct 10. Talk softly or don\'t talk at all. The music played softly. >> Correct

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