homework

Hi Jehee!

A fantastic Thursday to us!

Very good!

You have a very good and interesting composition.

Thank you for making your homework!

However, you need to see some corrections below and remember the rules in English.

By the way, I am not yet married, and I think I don\'t have any plans to settle down or get married.

So far, I am very happy and contented.

I agree that we have the same thinking.

Our own kids are really our greatest possession.

Their hugs and kisses are like awesome gifts.

I don\'t have my own child, but I have my older sister and younger sister\'s daughters.

And very soon, my younger brother will have a baby.

I consider my nieces as my own kids.

They also hug and kiss me.

I am also looking forward for my brother\'s baby\'s hugs and kisses.

Anyway, keep on making compositions to improve your English skills.

See you in our class!

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

What is your most important possession? Describe it and say why it is so important.

Hi!

It\'s cloudy today.

>> CORRECT!

>> OR: Today is cloudy.

I think it seems to rain soon.
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: I think it is going to rain soon.
There are many possession to me.

>> I have a lot of possessions.

Important possession of them is my children.
>> The most important among them are my children.
My son and daughter are my best treasure.

>> CORRECT!

Of course, my wife is also good woman.
>> Of course, my wife is also a treasre for me, because she is a good woman.

>> OR: ..., because she is a good mother and wife.
Flankly, My children is a little better than the wife.(^^)
>> Frankly, to me, my children are more valuable than my wife. (^^)
My daughter is very pretty, cute, lovely.

>> My daughter is very pretty, cute and lovely.

>> OR: My daughter is a very pretty cute lovely girl.

My son is also.
>> My son also.

>> OR: My son too.

>> OR: My son is also very pretty, cute and lovely.

>> OR: In the other hand, my son is handsome, cute and lovely.

>> OR: My son a very handsome cute lovely boy.

>> OR: My kids are both cute and lovely. In addition, my daughter is pretty. On the other hand, my son is handsome.

>> Now, my daughter is 5 years old, and my son is 8 years old.
When i finish my job and go to home, they always welcome me. Specially, My son come runing and hugs me.
>> When I finish my job and go back home, they always welcome me with kisses and hugs, specially my son. He comes to me running and hugs me.

At the moment, i am very happiest time.
>> At that moment, I am very happy.

>> OR: That moment, is my happiest time.
I don\'t know whether you got merried or not.

>> I don\'t know whether you got married or not.
But, i think my thought is same yours.
>> However, I think my thought is the same with yours.

>> OR: However, I think we have the same thinking.

>> OR: I don\'t know whether you are already married or not, but I think my thought is the same with yours.

Thank you!!!

>> CORRECT!

>> OR: That\'s all. Thanks you!