Homework.
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Hi Chelsea.
Happy Friday in Easter. Have you enjoy holiday?
I've recently been watching the "Prison Break", american drama is really exciting. I don't know it before watching them.
Anyway today's topic is "Do small decisions often have major consequences?"
I absolutely agree on this topic.
Sometimes small decisions change whole consequences. Although It is a small decision or a large decision, to choice decisions are difficult.
Recently I also choice my small problems for my work in office. I'm praying that everthing will be the best way.
I'm having Easter's egg. Enjoy your holiday, too
Bye :)
강사 첨삭
Hi there^^
Thank you for doing your homeowork^^
Yes, I know \"Prison Break\". It was one of my favorite American series.
Anyway, I made some corrections and I hope I was able to meet your points.
I agree with you. Small or big decisions, it\'s still difficult to decide.
But whatever you choose, juts make sure that you are satisfied and happy with your decision.
Like what I always tell you, \"Everything happens for a reason\". If that choice or decision didn\'t turn our to be okay, I know that in the end something better will happen.
I\'ll tlak to you tomorrow!
Happy Monday!
~T.Chelsea
Hi Chelsea.
>> CORRECT^^Happy Friday in Easter.
>> Happy Easter Friday.
>> Happy Easter.
Have you enjoy holiday?>> Are you enjoying your holiday?I\'ve recently been watching the \"Prison Break\", american drama is really exciting. I don\'t know it before watching them.>> I have been watching \"Prison Break\" recently. It\'s an American drama and it\'s reall exciting. I didn\'t know.Anyway today\'s topic is \"Do small decisions often have major consequences?\">> CORRECT^^I absolutely agree on this topic.>> CORRECT^^Sometimes small decisions change whole consequences.
>> Sometimes small decisions can have major consequences.
Although It is a small decision or a large decision, to choice decisions are difficult.>> Although it is a small or big decision, making decisions are diffiult.Recently I also choice my small problems for my work in office.
>> Recently, I also made some choices about my problems at work.
I\'m praying that everthing will be the best way.>> I\'m praying that everything will be the best.I\'m having Easter\'s egg. Enjoy your holiday, too>> CORRECT^^Bye :)
>> CORRECT^^
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