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2014-04-21 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Learning English is a challenge to get over for me. I can't speak fluently yet but I believe that it will become familiar to me someday. I will find the way to get conversation with foreigners after the exams. It will be another good way to enhance my English. Anyway, I will go to focus on studying before the exam. Please wish me luck again. :) <Homework> 1. Millions of people in poor countries still do not have ACCESS to electricity or safe drinking water. 2. He was the HEIR to the throne. 3. Her rapid ASCENT in the world entertainment surprised her critics and delighted her fans. 4. We watched as the plane ASCENDED. 5. The manager CONCEDED that competition had affected profits.

강사 첨삭

Hello there,

We do face a lot of challenges in life but facing it with determination will bring a big change in your life.

So, face that change in your life, look for the chance to talk with foreigners...in that way you can find yourself speaking the language well.

Have a great day, [이름]!!!

T. Jeny

 

Learning English is a challenge to get over for me.

>>Learning English is a challenge for me to get over.

>>Learning English is a challenge for me to overcome.

I can\'t speak fluently yet but I believe that it will become familiar to me someday.
>>I can\'t speak fluently yet, but I believe that I will be familiar with it someday.

I will find the way to get conversation with foreigners after the exams.

>>I will find a way to have a conversation with foreigners after the exams.
It will be another good way to enhance my English.

>>It will be another way for me to enhance my English.
Anyway, I will go to focus on studying before the exam.

>>Anyway, I will focus on studying before the exam.
Please wish me luck again. :)

>>correct

<Homework>
1. Millions of people in poor countries still do not have ACCESS to electricity or safe drinking water.
>>correct

2. He was the HEIR to the throne.

>>correct
3. Her rapid ASCENT in the world entertainment surprised her critics and delighted her fans.

>>correct
4. We watched as the plane ASCENDED.

>>correct
5. The manager CONCEDED that competition had affected profits.

>>correct

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