homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Talk about a person in your life who has inspired you. Describe the person and explain why you found him/her inspirational.
Hi.
How were you last weekend? i was good. i hope you were good too.
During my life so far, i had many poeple who has inspired me.
I specially had remember one man.
When i was a middle student, he is my teacher.
He was a awful teacher. We were beaten from him.
However, he was enthusiastic in class. We learned many things from him.
At that time, he wasn't merried and his age was 28.
The subject that he teached was science. i had studied the subject.
i often think and want to meet him. But i don't know where he is lived.
While we are living, we have many people that was given the inspiration.
It is important for us to remember their gratitude.
I will not forget him in my life. and i will find him someday.
If i meet him someday, i will say him. "Thank you for your instruction"
강사 첨삭
Hi Jehee!
An amazing Monday to you!
I was touched by your composition.
We are similar.
I can also say that my teachers inspired me a lot.
They contributed of what I am now.
Without them, I won\'t be here checking your composition and being your teacher.
By the way, who among my teachers inspired me the most?
Aha! It is my Mathematics teacher when I was in first year high school.
She was very serious at teaching, but she was also humorous.
Anyway, that\'s all for now!
Don\'t forget to check some corrections and suggestions below about your essay.
See you soon!
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
Hi.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: Hi!
How were you last weekend?
How were you last weekend?
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: How was your weekend?
i was good.
>> I was good.
i hope you were good too.
>> I hope you were good too.
During my life so far, i had many poeple who has inspired me.
>> During my life so far, I met many people who have inspired me.
>> I hope you were good too.
During my life so far, i had many poeple who has inspired me.
>> During my life so far, I met many people who have inspired me.
>> OR: So far in my life, I have met many people who have inspired me.
I specially had remember one man.
>> I specially remember one man.
When i was a middle student, he is my teacher.
>> When I was a middle school student, he was my teacher or one of my teachers.
He was a awful teacher.
I specially had remember one man.
>> I specially remember one man.
When i was a middle student, he is my teacher.
>> When I was a middle school student, he was my teacher or one of my teachers.
He was a awful teacher.
>> He was an awful teacher.
We were beaten from him.
>> We were beaten by him.
However, he was enthusiastic in class.
>> We were beaten by him.
However, he was enthusiastic in class.
>> CORRECT!
We learned many things from him.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: We leaned a lot of things from him.
At that time, he wasn\'t merried and his age was 28.
>> At that time, he wasn\'t married, and his age was 28.
The subject that he teached was science.
At that time, he wasn\'t merried and his age was 28.
>> At that time, he wasn\'t married, and his age was 28.
The subject that he teached was science.
>> The subject that he taught was Science.
>> OR: He taught us Science.
>> OR: He was out Science teacher.
i had studied the subject.
>> I had studied the subject.
>> I had studied the subject.
>> OR: I studied the subject.
i often think and want to meet him. But i don\'t know where he is lived.
>> I often think and want to meet him, but I don\'t know where he lives.
While we are living, we have many people that was given the inspiration.
>> While we are living, we meet many people that can give us inspirations in life.
It is important for us to remember their gratitude.
>> It is important for us to remember them.
i often think and want to meet him. But i don\'t know where he is lived.
>> I often think and want to meet him, but I don\'t know where he lives.
While we are living, we have many people that was given the inspiration.
>> While we are living, we meet many people that can give us inspirations in life.
It is important for us to remember their gratitude.
>> It is important for us to remember them.
>> OR: It is important for us to give gratitude to them.
I will not forget him in my life. and i will find him someday.
>> I will never forget him, and I will find him someday.
If i meet him someday, i will say him. \"Thank you for your instruction\"
I will not forget him in my life. and i will find him someday.
>> I will never forget him, and I will find him someday.
If i meet him someday, i will say him. \"Thank you for your instruction\"
>> If I meet him someday, I will tell him, \"Thank you for your instructions.\"
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