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2014-04-22 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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What would you miss most when you are away from home? Usually I miss cell phone or car key when I am away frome home. Thesedays, cell phone is very important so I know soon that I miss it. Although I will be late to go work, I go right back home to bring it. It's uncomfortable without cell phone. Why do I lost it at that time? I listen to radio in the morning until go to work. Sometime it is under the book. Moreover if I don't wear clothing which have not pocket, I used to miss it. I try to check before departing to work. Thank you.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Ms. [Name]!

Uhmm, I guess you misunderstood the question.

What have you understood by \'miss\' is you forgot it.

But what I mean here by \'miss\' is to discover or regret the loss or absence of.

For example, what do you miss from home when you are in another country?
Do you miss the food, the comfortable feeling when you are at home, etc.?

Anyway, thanks for sharing thanks for still answering the topic that I have given you.

Hope you will have a good time!

Take care!


Always,

Kathrine ^^


What would you miss most when you are away from home?


 Usually I miss cell phone or car key when I am away frome home.

>>  I usually miss my cell phone or my car keys when I am away from home.

Thesedays, cell phone is very important so I know soon that I miss it.

>>  correct!

Although I will be late to go work, I go right back home to bring it.

>>  Although I am already late to go to work, I will go right back home to bring it/ to get it back.

 It\'s uncomfortable without cell phone. 

>> It\'s uncomfortable without a cell phone.
 Why do I lost it at that time?

>>  Why did I lose it that time?

 I listen to radio in the morning until go to work.

>>  I listen to the radio in the morning until I go to work.

Sometime it is under the book.

>>  correct!

Moreover if I don\'t wear clothing which have not pocket, I used to miss it.

>>  Moreover, if I don\'t wear clothes which has no pocket, I often miss it.

I try to check before departing to work. Thank you.

>>  I\'ll try to check everything before departing to work. Thank you.

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