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HI Nina!
OMG! I love this question too!
There's something general knowledge about Korea can be useful!
It's about religious context in korea. This is a my personal opinion but
I think most korean people agree with this. May be I think Half of Koreans
are protestant(not catholic) and others are not. Of course, many people
have a official religion, Like his parent's religion But I mean people who have
belief of heart. For this reason a young generation in Korea is divided two
group. one group is celebrate Easter and have a great time, and other group has no
conception of easter, and even they don't know what day easter is.
It's Suprise to you! isn't it? (or Maybe you already knew that too from your
Million students) But korean society does. Any way, In my case,
I exactly know what is the easter is, and also I was celebrated easter
when I was a child. But unfortunately not now, because Oh! there's limited number
of letter. I'll finish up tomorrow! Maganda Gabi! Sweetdreams!
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Hi [이름]!
Thank you for writing a long essay. Hihihi! Just kidding!
How are you doing today? I hope that you are having a great time.
Actually, it is my first time to hear about this.
Thank you for the information.^^ Our class is a two way process of learning.
I really love our class. See you!Teacher Nina
HI Nina! >> Correct! OMG! I love this question too!
>> Correct! There\'s something general knowledge about Korea can be useful!
>> There\'s something in general knowledge about Korea that can be useful. It\'s about religious context in korea.
>> It\'s about the religious context in Korea.
This is a my personal opinion butI think most korean people agree with this.
>> Did you mean: This is my personal opinion but I think most Korea people will agree with this,
May be I think Half of Koreans are protestant(not catholic) and others are not.
>> I think half of the Korean population are protestants, and the others ar not.
Of course, many people have a official religion,
>> Did you mean: Of course, many people have a religion.
Like his parent\'s religion But I mean people who have belief of heart.
>> Did you mean: Like his parents\' religion, I mean the people who really believes by heart.
For this reason a young generation in Korea is divided two group.
>> For this reason, young generations in Korea are divided into two groups.
one group is celebrate Easter and have a great time, and other group has no conception of easter, and even they don\'t know what day easter is.
>> Did you mean: One group celebrates Easter and having a great time. On the other hand, the other group don\'t have knowlege about Easter. It\'s Suprise to you! isn\'t it? (or Maybe you already knew that too from your Million students) But korean society does.
>> Did you mean: Isn\'t it surprising? Or maybe you already knew about this from your students, It exists in Korean society.
Any way, In my case, I exactly know what is the easter is, and also I was celebrated easter when I was a child.
>> Anyway, in my case, I exactly know what Easter is and I celebrated it when I was a child.
>> OR: In my case, I know what Easter is and I celebrated it when I was young.
But unfortunately not now, because Oh! there\'s limited number of letter.
>> Unfortunately, I don\'t celebrate it nowadays. Oh! The number of letters are limited.
I\'ll finish up tomorrow!
>> I\'ll finish this composition tomorrow.
Maganda Gabi!
>> Correct!
Sweetdreams!
>> Correct!
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