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I think traveling with family is good idea for me.
Because most family didn't talk each other because of cell phone,TV, and computer.
If I travel with family, I will talk more than different time.
How about you?
강사 첨삭
Hi there Tom!
Happy second day of the week.
How are you? I missed you yesterday?
Did you prepare for something? I am excited to hear your ideas in class.
You are right. There are families who lack communication.
Traveling is really good especially if you are with your family. See you!Teacher Nina
I think traveling with family is good idea for me.
>> I think traveling with my family is a good idea.
>> OR: Traveling with my family is good for me. Because most family didn\'t talk each other because of cell phone,TV, and computer.
>> Most families don\'t talk with each other because of cell phone, TV and computer.
>> OR: Most families don\'t communicate with each other because of cell phone, TV and computer. If I travel with family, I will talk more than different time.
>> If I travel with my family, I will talk more than before. How about you?
>> Corect!
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