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2014-04-22 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I think traveling with family is good idea for me. Because most family didn't talk each other because of cell phone,TV, and computer. If I travel with family, I will talk more than different time. How about you?

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Hi there Tom! Happy second day of the week. How are you? I missed you yesterday? Did you prepare for something? I am excited to hear your ideas in class. You are right. There are families who lack communication. Traveling is really good especially if you are with your family. See you!Teacher Nina   I think traveling with family is good idea for me. >> I think traveling with my family is a good idea. >> OR: Traveling with my family is good for me. Because most family didn\'t talk each other because of cell phone,TV, and computer. >> Most families don\'t talk with each other because of cell phone, TV and computer. >> OR: Most families don\'t communicate with each other because of cell phone, TV and computer. If I travel with family, I will talk more than different time. >> If I travel with my family, I will talk more than before. How about you? >> Corect!

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