Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there Chlesea.
My friend told me that If you watch the drama without subtitle, you will be sure that reach the goal faster. so I'm watching the another drama recently. It is "Sex and the city season 1". It was start almost 10 years ago, so there are a lot of things of older, such as really big mobile phone, past fashions...
I'm understand a little story but I'm enjoying it.
Anyway my homework's topis is "What do you think is interesting about your culture?"
Korean people have a lot of affection. so when a disaster happens in Korea, citizen will fight the disaster together. Recently a cruise ship was hit the reef and sink in the Korea West of sea. so many people were died.
Korean people pray and help them. I'm very sorry that.
Anyway I'll finish it now. and see you tomorrow.
Be careful cold Chelsea. Bye~
강사 첨삭
Hi there Luke!
Thank you for doing your homework!
You really are improving.
Your friend is right. You will learn faster without any subtitle but take it slow. Try to imitate them as well for you to improve your pronunciation and accent.
I\'ll see you later!
~T.Chelsea
Hi there Chlesea.>> CORRECT^^My friend told me that If you watch the drama without subtitle, you will be sure that reach the goal faster. so I\'m watching the another drama recently.
>> My friend told me that if you watch a drama without subtitle you will reach your goal faster for sure. So, I have been watching drama recently.
It is \"Sex and the city season 1\".
>> CORRECT^^
It was start almost 10 years ago, so there are a lot of things of older, such as really big mobile phone, past fashions...
>> It started 10 years ago, so a lot of things are old, such as mobile phones and really old fashions..I\'m understand a little story but I\'m enjoying it.>> I don\'t understand the story quite well but I\'m enjoying it.Anyway my homework\'s topis is \"What do you think is interesting about your culture?\">> CORRECT^^Korean people have a lot of affection. so when a disaster happens in Korea, citizen will fight the disaster together.
>> Korean people are very affectionate, so when a disaster happen in Korea, the citizens will fight the disaster together.
Recently a cruise ship was hit the reef and sink in the Korea West of sea. so many people were died. >> Recently a cruise ship hit the reed and sunk in the Korea West Sea, so many people died.Korean people pray and help them. I\'m very sorry that.>> Korean people are praying and helping them. I\'m very sorry about that.Anyway I\'ll finish it now. and see you tomorrow.
>> Anyway, I\'ll finish it now and I\'ll see you tomorrow.Be careful cold Chelsea. Bye~
>> Be careful of colds Chelsea. Bye!
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