homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR THE DAY:
Kindly answer the question below in a paragraph form:
If you had the opportunity to get a message across to a large group of people, what would it be?
I have two questions for you.
---message across to a large group of people--
1. Why is the word 'to' used before a large group of people instead of 'from'?
2. The word 'across' means 'from abroad'?
Answer:
It would be wonderful, of course.
Meeting with people on the other part of the world is always fascinating to me.
Because they have a different view to see the world, I can learn things which I already know newly and refreshingly .
I'd like to build relationships with others living out of Korea.
If I get a message from people living somewhere, It must be a.... spam mail.
At this moment in time, I can't imagine other sorts of messages because I have no friends outside.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Sir [이름]!
The word \"to\" is used instead of \"from\" because the because [이름] be coming from you and you [이름] be delivering it to a large group of people.
You used \"from\" if the message [이름] be coming from the people and not you.
In addition, \"across\" means from one side to another.
I like you asking questions and clarifications if you something\'s not clear.
That\'s one way of learning.
So if you have more questions, just ask me and I\'ll be more than happy to answer it for you.
Anyway, if you have time, please find time to check the corrections I made.
See you!
Teacher Janice
HOMEWORK FOR THE DAY:Kindly answer the question below in a paragraph form:If you had the opportunity to get a message across to a large group of people, what would it be?I have two questions for you.---message across to a large group of people--
>> Correct 1. Why is the word \'to\' used before a large group of people instead of \'from\'?
>> Correct 2. The word \'across\' means \'from abroad\'?
>> Correct Answer:It would be wonderful, of course.
>> Correct Meeting with people on the other part of the world is always fascinating to me.
>> Meeting people from other parts of the world fascinates me always.Because they have a different view to see the world, I can learn things which I already know newly and refreshingly .
>> Because they have different views of the world, I can learn new things.I\'d like to build relationships with others living out of Korea.
>> I would like to build relationships with other people living outside Korea.If I get a message from people living somewhere, It must be a.... spam mail.
>> If I get messages from people living somewhere, it\'s always spam mails.At this moment in time, I can\'t imagine other sorts of messages because I have no friends outside.
>> At this moment, I can\'t imagine receiving messages from foreign people because I don\'t have friends from other countries.
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