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2014-04-24 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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In South Korea you can choose your own cell phone number. Explain why you choose that number and what meaning it has to you? Yes, I can choose my own cell phone number. When I bought a cell phone, I was helped from my brother so my cell phone number was similar with them. After marriage, it became same last four number with my husband. This is because he bought it so he choose the number. My husband is interest in cell phone so he can buy it cheeply. He alos know which cell phone is better so I just follow him on that point. Last number is 5878 but I don't know that meaning. Anyway, my father in law and sister in law have it to mobile number. You know that my home phone number is 5878, too. Usually many people use same number with family. It is almost home phone number. Sometime they use date such as birthday, anniversary and so on. Thank you.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [Name]!

 I think that it is better for every phone users to choose their own number.

Because in my country, we use prepaid sim cards.
That is why we cannot choose the phone numbers that we want to have.

Anyway, thanks for today Ms. [Name]!
See you tomorrow!

Always,
Kathrine ^^



In South Korea you can choose your own cell phone number. Explain why you choose that number and what meaning it has to you?

Yes, I can choose my own cell phone number.

>>  correct!

When I bought a cell phone, I was helped from my brother so my cell phone number was similar with them.

>>  My brother helped me when I bought my cell phone so my cell phone number is similar with him.

After marriage, it became same last four number with my husband.

>>  After getting married, the last four numbers are the same with my husband.

This is because he bought it so he choose the number.

>>  It is because he bought it so he also chose the number.

My husband is interest in cell phone so he can buy it cheeply.

>>  My husband has an interest in cell phones so he can buy it cheaper.

He also know which cell phone is better so I just follow him on that point.

>>  He also knows which cellphone is better so I am just following him on that point.

Last number is 5878 but I don\'t know that meaning.

>>  The last four numbers are 5878 but I don\'t know its meaning.

Anyway, my father in law and sister in law have it to mobile number.

>>  Anyway, my father-in-law and my sister-in-law also have this number.

You know that my home phone number is 5878, too.

>>  correct!

Usually many people use same number with family.

>>  Usually many people use the same number with their family.

It is almost home phone number.

>>  It is almost a  home phone number.

Sometime they use date such as birthday, anniversary and so on. Thank you.

>>  Sometime they use dates such as birthday, anniversary and so on. Thank you.

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