homework
학생이 쓴 원문
We should be careful for giving advice.
Because some advice can give wound.
But giving advice is helpful to other people.
강사 첨삭
A nice day to you Tom!
You are right! Some can hurt other people but it also depends on how they take it.
It is really important that we should be careful with our actions.
We should be sensitive enough. You did a good job in sharing your ideas about this topic.
See you later. Take Care!Teacher Nina
We should be careful for giving advice.
>> We should be careful in giving advices.Because some advice can give wound.
>> Because some pieces of advice can hurt people.
But giving advice is helpful to other people.
>> But giving a piece of advice is helpful to other people.
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