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What do you think is interesting about your culture?
I am interesting about the fashion. Most of Korean have senstive cherector about the trend. Every years of cloths design change very quickly in Korea. In addition, a lot of Korean like to buy new cloths following the fashion of trend. Therefore, you can see the similar cloths when you are working the street at Seoul.
Sometimes, these style are pointed out bad thing by foreign countries. For example, Korean need to have a self-cherector about the cloths.
But, there are in the Korean culture such as 'fast' and 'fast'. This culture is possible to make so much the supply and consume very fast more than the other countries. Also, the changing fashions help to make a sensitive responds about the other part. And most of Korean are very quickly reaction on all of thing.
This algorithm makes one of the result to be a quickly advanced country more than the other nations.
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What do you think is interesting about your culture?I am interesting about the fashion.
>> I am interested about Korean fashion.
Most of Korean have senstive cherector about the trend. >> Do you mean, \"Most Koreans have a unique character when it comes to fahion.\"
Every years of cloths design change very quickly in Korea.
>> Every year, the designs of clothes change very fast in Korea.
In addition, a lot of Korean like to buy new cloths following the fashion of trend.
>> In addition, a lot of Koreans like to buy new clothes that are trendy.
Therefore, you can see the similar cloths when you are working the street at Seoul. >> Therefore, you can see the same clothes when you are walking on the street of Seoul.Sometimes, these style are pointed out bad thing by foreign countries.
>> Sometimes, these syles are pointed out to be as a bad thing by foreign countries.
For example, Korean need to have a self-cherector about the cloths.>> For example, Koreans need to have a self-character about their clothes.But, there are in the Korean culture such as \'fast\' and \'fast\'. >> But that is the Korean culture like, \"fast and fast\".
This culture is possible to make so much the supply and consume very fast more than the other countries. >> This culture is possible change because the demand and supply is very fast compared to other countries.
Also, the changing fashions help to make a sensitive responds about the other part.
>> Also, the changes i fashion help making sensitive responds about the other parts.
And most of Korean are very quickly reaction on all of thing. >> And most Koreans can quickly react on everything.This algorithm makes one of the result to be a quickly advanced country more than the other nations.
>> This algorithm makes one of the result to help the economy of the country then the other nations.
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