Homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there Chelsea.
It's really hot today. It's comming summer, I will make a nice body well for my summer vacation.
My homework's topic is "Are there more important issues than poverty? If so, name them in order of importance."
I think that most important thing is satisfied in daily, because Poverty will solve to hard working. I've never seen that hungry people who hard working(= hard working people aren't hungry)
So that is most important thing is satisfied, such as be happy, rest and be with lover.
Actually first when i was until 30 age, I want to make a lot of money than satisfied.
But after i get married, I want satisfied with my daily than money.kkkk
Anyway It's so sunny today, Enjoy your day. Bye ~
강사 첨삭
Hi there^^
Thank you for doing your homework!
I made some corrections and I hope I was able to meet all your points.
I\'ll see you tomorrow!
Enjoy the rest of your day!
~T.Chelsea
Hi there Chelsea.>> CORRECT^^It\'s really hot today.
>> CORRECT^^
It\'s comming summer, I will make a nice body well for my summer vacation.>> Summer is already approaching. I will make my body fir for summer vacation.My homework\'s topic is \"Are there more important issues than poverty? If so, name them in order of importance.\">> CORRECT^^I think that most important thing is satisfied in daily, because Poverty will solve to hard working. >> I think the most important thing is being satisfied everyday becayse povery will be solved through hard work.
I\'ve never seen that hungry people who hard working(= hard working people aren\'t hungry)>> I\'ve never seen hardworking people get hungry.So that is most important thing is satisfied, such as be happy, rest and be with lover.>> So, the most important thing is to be satisfied, such as being happy, taking rest and be with you love one.Actually first when i was until 30 age, I want to make a lot of money than satisfied.
>> Actually, the first thing I want before I reach the age of 30 is to earn a lot of money.But after i get married, I want satisfied with my daily than money.kkkk>> But after I get married, I want to be satisfied with the money I earn everyday. Kkkk.Anyway It\'s so sunny today, Enjoy your day. Bye ~
>> CORRECT^^
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