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Hi!!! How are you today? I went to the workshop related to my work today. I didn't bring my car because i went there by subway. Perhaps we may speak to free talking. Anyway, i must do my homework now. All family are close to me. it is very difficult to choice one of them. If i must select someone, she is my wife. I met her through senior's introduction 12 years ago. After we met for three years, we decided to marry. She is beautiful, lovely and wise. i will love to the death. We have a dual income. i am always sorry her. We have to bring up our chiilren and also do our job. Therefore, we always are busy. We eagerly must live for our children. Sorry!!! I have no time more. Good bye!!!

Hi Jehee! Happy Thursday!   I am great today. I made myself more beautiful today. Hahaha~ How about you? How\'s the workshop?   You have made you composition beautifully. Don\'t worry because you did well, and the information you put in your composition is enough. I like what you have written. However, just be careful with the spelling and capitalization of the words. In addition, you also need to review grammar rules.   Anyway, very good! Keep it up! See you!   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Hi!!!How are you today?I went to the workshop related to my work today.>> CORRECT! >> OR: Today, I went to the workshop related to my current job.I didn\'t bring my car because i went there by subway.>> I didn\'t bring my car, because I went there by subway. (Capitalization)Perhaps we may speak to free talking. >> Perhaps, we can speak about any topics. (Punctuation & Grammar: Use a comma [,] after an adverb which is at the beginning of a sentence. Please, check these patterns, speak to someone and speak about something.) >> OR: Perhaps, we can have free talking.Anyway, i must do my homework now.>> Anyway, I must do my homework now. (Capitalization)All family are close to me. >> All family members are close to me. (Grammar) it is very difficult to choice one of them.>> It is very difficult to choose from one of them. (Grammar) >> OR: It is very difficult to choose among them.If i must select someone, she is my wife.>> If I must select someone, that person will be my wife. (Grammar)I met her through senior\'s introduction 12 years ago.>> CORRECT! >> OR: I met her through one of my seniors twelve years ago.After we met for three years, we decided to marry.>> CORRECT! >> OR: After seeing or meeting each other for three years, we decided to get married.She is beautiful, lovely and wise. >> CORRECT! i will love to the death.>> I will love to death. (Capitalization) >> OR: I will love her until I die. >> OR: I will love her until death.We have a dual income. >> CORRECT! i am always sorry her.>> I am always sorry to her. (Capitalization & Grammar) >> OR: I always feel sorry for her.We have to bring up our chiilren and also do our job. >> We have to bring up our children and also do our job. (Spelling)Therefore, we always are busy.>> CORRECT! >> OR: We are always busy.We eagerly must live for our children. >> We must eagerly live for our children. (Grammar)Sorry!!!   I have no time more.>> I don\'t have more time. (Grammar)    >> OR: Sorry because I don\'t have more time to tell more about my homework. Good bye!!!