Homework.

2014-04-25 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi Daniel, _My__ name is John. This is _your__ friend Jason. He's 12. __His__ sister is nine. They have got a pet._His__ pet is a budgie. _Pet's_ name is Charlie. Jason and I go to the same school. There are 450 boys and girls in _their___ school. Jason's form teacher is Mrs. [Name]. She has got a pet, too. __Her__ pet is a tortoise. Our form teacher is Mr. [Name]. I like __his__ lessons. He has two dogs. The dogs love to play in _his__ garden. Now I have a question for you. What's __??__ pet? Yours, [이름]

강사 첨삭

Hi there Julie!

Thank you for answering your homework.

I hope that you\'ll consistently answer all your homework.

Anyway,  please go over the corrections.

See you on Monday!

~T. Jessie~

My name is [Name].

>> Correct!

This is your friend Jason.

>> This is my friend Jason.

 His sister is nine.

>> Correct!

His pet is a budgie.

>> Their pet  is a budgie.

Pet\'s name is Charlie.

>> His name is Charlie.

There are 450 boys and girls in their school.

>> There are 450 boys and girls in our school

 Her pet is a tortoise.

>> Correct!

I like his lessons. He has two dogs.

>> Correct!

The dogs love to play in his garden.

>> Correct!

What\'s __??__ pet?
>>  What\'s your pet?

 

Hi Daniel,


My name is [Name]. This is my friend Jason. He\'s 12. His sister is nine. They have got a pet. Their pet is a budgie. His name is Charlie. Jason and I go to the same school. There are 450 boys and girls in our school. Jason\'s form teacher is Mrs. [Name]. She has got a pet, too. Her pet is a tortoise. Our form teacher is Mr. [Name]. I like his lessons. He has two dogs. The dogs love to play in his garden. Now I have a question for you. What\'s your pet?

 

Yours,
John


 

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