homework

2014-04-25 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Hi Daniel, My_ name is John. This is _my_ friend Jason. He's 12. His_ sister is nine. They have got a pet._ Their__ pet is a budgie. _It_ name is Charlie. Jason and I go to the same school. There are 450 boys and girls in our_ school. Jason's form teacher is Mrs. [Name]. She has got a pet, too. _Her_pet is a tortoise. Our form teacher is Mr. [Name]. I like his_lessons. He has two dogs. The dogs love to play in _his_ garden. Now I have a question for you. What's your pet? Yours, [이름]

강사 첨삭


Hello there!

Thank you for answering your homework.

You did great!

Well then have an enjoyable weekend!

~T. Jessie~

Hi Daniel,
My name is [Name]. This is my friend Jason. He\'s 12. His sister is nine. They have got a pet. Their pet is a budgie. It Its name is Charlie. Jason and I go to the same school. There are 450 boys and girls in our school. Jason\'s form teacher is Mrs. [Name]. She has got a pet, too. Her pet is a tortoise. Our form teacher is Mr. [Name]. I like his lessons. He has two dogs. The dogs love to play in his garden. Now I have a question for you. What\'s your pet?

Yours,
John
>> All of your answers are correct except for the underlined ones. The corrections are written after your answer.

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