homework

Yes, I also think that we are too dependent on technology. Many people don't read books in the bus or in the train anymore. we can see easily. If it is occurring a blackcut, we will get a big shocked. And we know that electromagnetic waves is not good for our healthy.

Hello there!
Thank you for expressing your opinion about it.
I am also thankful that you considered my corrections in your compositions,
Most of your sentences follow the correct capitalization already.
Anyway, please go over the corrections I made in your sentences.
See you on Monday!
~T. Jessie~
Yes, I also think that we are too dependent on technology.
>> Correct!
Many people don\'t read books in the bus or in the train anymore.
>> Correct!
we can see easily.
>> We can see it easily.
If it is occurring a blackcut, we will get a big shocked.
>> If there will be a blackout, it will be a big shock.
And we know that electromagnetic waves is not good for our healthy.
>> Correct!